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» Comics - CHAPTER 1 - July 27th, 2010, 1:30 am

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are beastly. <3

posted by niftyspiffyinajiffy on October 6th, 2010, 8:09 pm

Ah, I see you chose a lighter, mint green for this page. ( Reply )

It is a very interesting contrast between the energetic and ominous image that you've drawn and the cool relaxing minty color that you've chosen for this page. I wonder if you did this as a way to play with the conventional standard of red being a more emotional and danger conveying color. Was this intentional?
I just noticed that the eyes of the giant character licking the smaller character are looking into the distance instead of looking directly into the viewer's eye. The second would be what most people would choose to do as it a way to create tension between the reader and the character, but I believe that this distant look feels more like the character doesn't want to confront the viewer, as he or she doesn't feel he has a reason to explain his actions to the reader. He does whatever he wants and he doesn't have to answer to common views of what is right and what is wrong.
The character being licked reminds me of a turtle on it's back. This makes him look very defenseless. Is is meant to symbolize that he will go through situations in which he will be powerless and unable to control what happens around him, much like an upside down turtle?
Also, the handwritten "Chapter 1" typography could use a little more clarity. It is a little hard to read it vertically like this.

posted by Noroone on October 23rd, 2010, 9:25 pm

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Hush up.

posted by Rainbow (Guest) on February 14th, 2011, 5:10 pm

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cool. your art style looks awesome. really nice colouring job too. can't wait to read! >o<

posted by SomiJuli on June 7th, 2011, 3:11 pm

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